Friday, 2 December 2016

Breaking Radio Silence

I haven't posted here recently.

That said, I'm not exactly prolific when it comes to blogging.  However, the stats indicate that there are a few people out there who look in from time to time.  Thank you for that.

Anyway, here's an update on what I'm up to with my writing.

I'm about half way through the final edit of my latest novel.  I'm hoping it will be finished before the end of the year.  Then I'll get on with the process of publication.  No promises, but I'd like to think it will be published sometime during February or March.

After that, I'm going to spend some time chasing the short story market.  I may return to longer fiction at some point, but I've no plans for this at the moment.  There's no shortage of ideas.  I just don't have the appetite for grinding out 80,000 plus words on a single story.

So, now that we are into December and as I'm unlikely to blog again this year, have a Merry Christmas and a safe and happy New Year.

Monday, 25 July 2016

Cliches Do Have a Place in Writing

Writers are always being to not to use cliches (avoid them like the plague etc) as they are a sign of laziness and lack of imagination. We should all create wonderful new similes and metaphors to delight and intrigue (or confuse and bewilder) our readers.

Now, that piece of advice - or demand, depending on who you listen to - is all well and good until you start to get inside the head of your characters.  Real people regularly use cliches as part of their everyday conversations.  Most are neither lazy nor lacking in imagination.  They use cliches as a tried and trusted way of getting their message across.

Okay, so we all know a few exceptions who can't string two sentences together without having to slip in a cliche or three.  But, for the most part, a judiciously placed cliche really can enhance a piece of writing.

So what triggered this minor fit of petulance on my part?

I was reading a passage where a principle character was lamenting the break up of her marriage and, though she remained friends with her ex, the missed opportunities for them to get back together.

"That ship had sailed," was how she put it.

Now, this isn't one of the most heinous of cliches but it still ranks amongst those combinations of words that we are told never use.

The thing is though, it was brilliant.  It perfectly fitted the personality of the character.  I could easily see her saying it.

So there you go.  Used sparingly and at the right time cliches have their place.
And don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

Monday, 28 September 2015

It Makes Sense - But Not Money

I've just got six to nine months worth of reading for less than the cost of a Starbucks coffee.  I recharged my Kindle with about 15 new books, all from the Amazon free listings.

So, I've got over a dozen new writers to discover and this dozen or so new writers have got a potential follow up reader.  Better still, I've got months of reading for less than 3 quid.

Fantastic.  Everyone's a winner.  Only, they're not.

What's to stop me doing the same thing in six months times and getting a load more free books?
How is this going to generate any notable income for hard pushed indie / self-published writers?

Free promotions can work, I'm doing one myself in early October - but you can overdo it.  I've read three books by the same author and never paid a penny for the privilege.  The guy seems to have his entire back catalogue available in ebook form for free.

There is one new writer whose debut novel got me hooked though.  I'll be keeping an eye out for more of this writer's work - and be more than willing to pay to read him.

The writer is Rex Ivar and the book in question is called Chosen.

I got the book for free and really enjoyed it.  So it's a small price to pay to try to promote a fellow writer.

Saturday, 16 May 2015

No More 2D Characters

We all know that readers expect - and deserve - characters that are fully developed and credible.  This has been made all the more important by the accessibility of world news.  We can see what is going on around the globe, almost in real time, from the tv, our computers and our smart phones.  People's lives are played out on the screens in front of us.
At one time we would have no idea what people were like in different parts of the world.  Now, thanks to the immediacy of news and social media, we are learning more about the people of the world every day.
I hadn't really thought about this until a few weeks ago.  I was visiting Edinburgh Castle and was in the National War Museum.  As you can imagine, this charts the many conflicts that Scotland has been involved in over the generations - from the invasion of the English to Scotland's contribution to the recent conflicts in Afghanistan and Iraq.
At the start of my tour through the museum, war was portrayed as gallant and honourable.  Even as recent as World War Two, the reality of war was hidden.  Then I got to a photographic exhibition called Return To Helmand.
The power of one picture in particular has stayed with me.  It showed a group of about a dozen young soldiers.  A few were in uniform.  Most were in t-shirts and had dirty faces.  None were smiling.  All wore expressions of those who had seen and experienced things that no-one should have to endure.
Those young men and women were our children.
Now, this piece is not about the rights and wrongs or war, it's about character.  The reporting of conflicts brings us closer to the participants.  It reveals character.
As writers, we owe it to our readers to capture this character and develop it in the stories we produce.

Sunday, 22 February 2015

The Book is Dead - Long Live The Book

I'm reading the last book on my Kindle.  Fifty odd months after unwrapping my Christmas gift I'm on to my 131st ebook title.

For the nerds and anoraks out there, this has thrown up a few random facts (you can decide for yourself how interesting they are).

  • On my Kindle there are only 8 "top name authors" (about 20 books).
  • I only paid full price for 2 of these books.
  • About half of the 100+ books that are left are either self published or are from indie publishers.
  • I paid for about three quarters of these - and no, I didn't get the rest from pirate sites, they were on free promotions.

If I didn't own a Kindle I wouldn't have bought anywhere near as many books as I have - I can't afford that many print books.
This means that the best part of 50 authors wouldn't have got the few pence royalty payments for their work.  I know that doesn't sound like a lot but if you multiply a few pence by a few million Kindle owners then, hopefully, some indie writers are doing pretty well (better than me anyway).

I was probably like a lot of people when I got my Kindle.  I went on a buying spree to fill up the memory of the device.  I actually got nowhere near to doing that as I stopped buying new books sometime last year.  I was buying faster than I was reading and it would take me almost a year before I got onto the more recent purchases.

At the start of this year it was reported that the end of last year saw an upsurge in the sale of print books, a drop in the sale of e-readers and a collapse in the sale of ebooks.

  • Of course print books saw an increase in sales - it was Christmas.  You try wrapping an ebook.
  • E-reader sales fell because Amazon are product savvy and have evolved the Kindle into a tablet.
  • As for the collapse in e-books, it could be that, like me, many people just decided to get on and read their backlog of books.

Maybe the ebook bubble has burst, or maybe it's all just a natural balancing of the market.  I don't really know and to be honest, I don't really care.

When I finish my last book on Kindle I'm going retro and will be reading some paperbacks for a while.  After that I'll back into Amazon and Smashwords, looking for new titles.

One thing is for certain though, I'll be scrolling past the big names and the corporate publishers and will be looking for the diamonds in the rough.
We indies need to stick together and I'll being doing my bit to support as many of them as I can.

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Tuesday, 2 December 2014

Where The Heck Did She Come From?

I decided not to do NaNoWriMo this year.  I've still got a novella from last year's script to finish and I just didn't feel as if I had the appetite to commit to writing 50,000 plus words in 30 days.

As November drew nearer, I decided that I would sign up after all, but only write a handful of short stories.  Then, during the final week of October I thought it would be a good idea to write a little every day.  I still had no intention of pushing myself to hit the 50,000 word mark.  This year was going to be more relaxed.

I did write every day (finishing at 53800 words) and I did write a handful of short stories (8 in total).  I also penned one tale that just refused to lie down and demanded its voice.  This one finished up at about 12,000 words and, by the time I've fleshed it out, it will be novella length.

This all left me with about 9 days of writing to go.

Ever since my first NaNo, in 2011 I've had an idea for a three part fantasy story.  I began writing.  I've got a few waypoint ideas in mind but pretty much put one word after the other, letting the story unfold itself.

As I approached one of these waypoints in the story I realised that I needed a device to get me off a particular path that I'd written myself onto.  A new character was needed to put in a brief appearance, help the main character, and then bow out.

So where the heck did she come from?

I've landed myself with a feisty young woman who has issues with her life so far and a determination to do something about it.  Far from being compliant and subservient - just playing her part and then getting the hell out of my story - this little madam has every intention of sticking around.  In the space of a few pages I've written myself a second principal character.

This newcomer will be make for some interesting conflicts later on in the story.  My first principal character is a loner and not one for co-operating with others.  I suspect that this won't bother the young woman one jot.  She will be around for quite a while.  Whether I'll let her stay the distance is another matter.  Killing her off won't be easy though, I may have to catch her unawares with a knife in the dark.

Friday, 2 May 2014

So Long, And Thanks For All The Fish

This was going to be my last ever blog post.

I'd read all the advice about having an on-line presence and how having a blog was one of the most important platforms a writer could have.
I'd also read how important it was to provide followers with content - blog, post, share etc regularly.  Give people what they want and keep them coming back.  Apparently, one of the biggest crimes in the on-line world is to set up a blog and then not keep it fresh and up to date.

That's where my problems began.  It's never been a case of not having time - my day job has drummed in effective time management.  No, my problem is more about having something to say.
I'm the sort of person who prefers to get on with it and not talk about it.
Added to that, I've never been a chatty or open  person, I hate talking about me and what I'm doing.  I'm a listener, not a talker; and, for a writer, that's not necessarily a bad thing.  I can easily spawn new characters from the people I watch and listen to.  When I do my talking it tends to be through the characters I create.
Any observations I make about the world in general tend to be short and pithy - suited to sites like Facebook and Twitter.  They also tend to be very tongue in cheek and are best taken with a healthy pinch of salt.

So, I decided, blogging isn't my thing and I was going to call it a day.

Then I read a lot of posts about people who were throwing in the towel as writers and pulling all their books from sale.
Some of these have strong valid reasons for calling it a day - and good luck to them.  For others though, it seems as if their indie author bubble has burst.  Writing a book is tough enough.  Marketing and promoting the damn thing is tens of times harder.  I get the impression that some people were under the impression that if they just wrote something, slapped a pretty cover on it and stuck it on Amazon then they would be an over night success.  It was a kind of "build it and they will come" approach.  The trouble is, everyone's "building it" and no-one's coming.

On a positive, though totally selfish, note, the more that drop out the less competition.  Those who stick it out will one day prevail - last man standing if you like.  Oh well, we can dream.

Anyway, not wishing to be thought of as having thrown in the towel this will not be my last ever blog post (stop moaning at the back).   I'm still around and still writing.  In fact, I've got two projects on the go where I've got plenty to say from behind the facade of my characters.  That way you'll never know if the views are mine or made up.
I will be back one day with updates on what I'm up to but, in the meantime - so long, and thanks for all the fish.